Which paragraph would get you to move to Corpus?!

Josh is hiring an adjuster for Corpus . . . again (go Geico!), so he gave me the opportunity to help him write the advertisement . . . he said I got carried away though, so you decide, do you like the opening of advertisement #1 or #2?!  Of course we went on with both advertisements talking about the population, Hooks, Lexington, Aquarium, mild temperatures, lots of sunshine, arts and museum district, one of the top 20 beaches in the U.S. (Malachite Beach), waterfront market days, sixth largest port, botanical gardens, birdiest city, first-class marina . . . who wouldn't move here?!!

ADJUSTER POSITION FOR CORPUS CHRISTI AREA IS NOW OPEN
#1
Wouldn’t it be nice to be just about anywhere you would ever need to go in 15 minutes? In Corpus Christi you can do that. How about drive for over 50 miles on the beach? Padre Island is the most undeveloped coast in the US and offers unparalleled fishing, windsurfing, and kite boarding.
You could join me windsurfing-----
#2 
The wind blows as the birds can be heard flying overhead.  The waves crash on shore.  You slowly walk to the water’s edge, and feel the cold liquid rush over your toes, then feet, swallowing your legs into a refreshing and relaxing state.  Slowly your chin rises, your eyes close, and you take in all that is around you, and realize this is not a dream, this is real, and this is home.  And this can be yours if you apply for the auto damage adjuster position in Corpus Christi, Texas.

he-he  (please refer to the previous post as why I might have gotten carried away, and well . . . I love Corpus too!)  :)

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